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Condo city final ... by 3DEricDesign Condo city final ... by 3DEricDesign
Condo city ...
ok this is the scene info

for the light 12 in total
8 spot with soft shadow and visible with dust
1 spot not illumination whit inverse volumetric effect

2 area light one whit soft shadow and one with area shadow

1 omni light with hard shadow
render time for this in 1440x900 is 1hr 14min 18sec with GI

machine for render is quad Q6600 with 8 gig of ram on windows vista 64 bit .

so thx all of for watch this creation and your comment or suggestion is very appreciate.

Ericdesign09
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Eric...

I think you've really outdone yourself with this work, the table glass is perfect., The sofa design very unique and all of the 'components' within the space work very well together. The exterior lighting through the wood roll blinds is really nice. The floor surface is really nice, from this 'view' though the awesome rug in front of the couch doesn't show it's texture. The cabinetry for the stereo and TV are really nice. The in ceiling lights really created a nice touch to the space as did the hanging light over the table. The space looks lived in with the couch having a towel laying over the side, and the items on the coffee table.

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Wow, such an amazing render and the light is so cool!

I am no 3D guy, at all, so I can't really tell you if something is technically wrong, but you have some AA issues (Anti Aliasing), with some rough edges with jaggy edges, which for me is really distracting (like on top of the lamp above the table and other places), I also love the materials you used, especially the floor, it looks so shiny and nice.

It's a really good render, looks very realistic with the light coming from behind the window blinds, incredible work and a nice, modern room.
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HolyTripDontTrip Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013
Love, love, love it!
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3DEricDesign Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
thx :)
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rfalk Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2009   Digital Artist
The sun Flare is to bright, it washes out the table edge.

Now, before getting annoyed at that rather too picky and wholey subjective critique, Please understand I had to look forever for something even remotely critical to say here! It was Tough I am telling ya!

Really, this is nearly flawless work here, the play of lighting and color, as well as the elegant, minimalist, design styling is very nearly perfect. Most would never realise this is not a photo. Excellent work and all the praise I see here is well deserved. Never Stop Amigo! >clapping<
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3DEricDesign Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
wow dude thank you so much for your great comment is very appreciate :)
and i work hard on the light setup so thx for this :)
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rfalk Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2009   Digital Artist
Jeeeez! n He's Modest TOO! :)

It shows my friend, your signiture "attention to detail" never fails to impress me. Never Stop!
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3DEricDesign Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
thank you so much rfalk for your support :)
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rfalk Featured By Owner May 5, 2009   Digital Artist
Welcome Mon Ami!

OOOOooooo! OoO WAY-COOL Icon you got there, Lovin IT!!!! :D
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MangakaOnline Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
WOW!!! :3 beautiful :3
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3DEricDesign Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
thank you so much ;)
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MangakaOnline Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
no prob :3
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capsat Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2009
This looks great! I love the lighting. Which software package do you use?
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3DEricDesign Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
first thx for your comment and my software in cinema4d r11.
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capsat Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2009
Np mate :) I use C4D R11 too. Do you use Vray?, I use AR for my renders. I love the effect you created on the blinds, not exactly sure how to tackle it.
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3DEricDesign Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
i use only AR fro my render because is great and fast ;)
for the blinds effect is volumetric light with some adjustment :)
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capsat Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2009
That's a good technique, I really never use volumetric lights, I should try it ;)
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3DEricDesign Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
is cool light effect but need some adjustment for look great :)
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BlueSnowGiesha Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2009
gosh.
you and ~zigshot82
and your photo looking renders.
P:
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3DEricDesign Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
thx bluesnow :)
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BlueSnowGiesha Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2009
no problem :]
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aragorn3000 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2009
Là c'est clair et net (comme ton salon) on a atteint le photoréalisme.

J'ai vraiment envie de m'extasier très longtemps vois-tu :) Mais partant du principe que la perfection ne sera jamais atteinte, je vais probablement un peu casser ta suite de compliments pour me concentrer sur les quelques défauts de ta création (à mon goût il y en a dsl :p)

Tout d'abord, je conçois parfaitement que ce soit une pièce d'une propreté hermétique + propre que dans les pubs, et ça ne constitue pas un défaut à mon avis, mon premier reproche sera à propos de ton magnifique sol, je conçois qu'il est ultra propre pure à 100%, mais là c'est quasiment un miroir!

Mon second reproche portera sur la "tâche" de lumière vers la fenêtre qui est à mon goût beaucoup beaucoup trop blanche, si je la regardais dans la réalité deviendrais-je aveugle??

Mon troisième reproche portera sur les lampes qui me semblent allumées. Peux-tu me dire pourquoi les lampes sont allumées alors qu'il a l'air de faire le soleil le plus éclatant du monde dehors et qu'en + le sol et probablement d'autres éléments de cette salle qu'on peut imaginer sont très réfléchissants? De plus, s'il n'y a pas assez de lumière, pk utiliser les stores?

Mon quatrième reproche s'intéresse aux tableaux du fond qui sont trop voyants, je pense que dans un tel éclairage on aurait des reflets (s'ils sont vitrés) ou au moins un minimum de lumière, on dirait des écrans ici.

Mon dernier reproche (oui c'est la fin ;)) s'attaquera à plusieurs éléments. Tout d'abord, la chose du centre de l'image (le ruban blanc divin...), je ne sais pas ce que c'est, et si c'est une lampe ou autre chose, je ne connais rien qui dans la réalité peut-être aussi blanc à l'oeil, à part le soleil quand on le regarde peut être? Et même chose pour l'interrupteur. Pour poursuivre je m'attaque au meuble dont j'ignore l'utilité situé dans le fond de ta pièce, le truc en bois avec des éléments noirs dessus, le problème ici étant qu'ils sont noirs et.. c'est tout, pas de reflets, pas de lumière, on dirait du Shadeless :s Encore une chose, mais là je pinaille un peu, le tissu noir sur ton sublime canapé, à l'endroit où il se courbe on peut encore distinguer une coupe un peu carré, c'est d'autant plus "voyant" que c'est noir sur blanc. Et pour finir (promis après ça jte laisse), je trouve ta plante très palotte, plate...


Tu le sais déjà ce n'est pas méchant du tout, et je m'en voudrais d'avoir écris tant de choses "négatives" en partant sans ajouter que je bave littéralement devant ton travail, les "défauts" que j'ai trouvé restent minimes, c'est, je pense, l'une de tes plus belles créations, j'espère que ma critique te serviras plus et t'aiguilleras plus que les 2 du haut. :)

Tu as tout mon respect, j'ai n'ai plus de mots...

Respectueusement, François.
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3DEricDesign Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Ça c'est du commentaire pour sur :)

merci d'avoir pris le temps de m'expliquer ce que tu trouvait qui n'allais pas dans ma création et j'en prend notes :)

merci Aragorn et A+
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aragorn3000 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2009
De rien, encore bravo a+ ;)
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3DEricDesign Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
;)
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Gymnart Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice! Nice! Nice!
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miyakies Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2009
OMFG, I just... I acnt find the right word how 2 describe it :O :D
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3DEricDesign Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
:) thx for your comment
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miyakies Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2009
ur welcome x)
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MurilloDesign Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2009  Student
impressive realims !
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3DEricDesign Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
thank you so much :)
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jsdu19 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
j'aime beaucoup, très jolie création c'est un travail très soigné :) j'aime bien le kentia aussi
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3DEricDesign Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
merci js .
moi c'est le aa qui me dérange beaucoup donc je faire un nouveaux rendue :)
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jsdu19 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oui c'est vrai que ça flash un peu derrière la fenêtre , et éventuellement un cache pot plus classe
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3DEricDesign Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
yep et AA est vraiment a revoir :)
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MehmetKozan Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2009
wow cool work...and 8gig ram xD
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3DEricDesign Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
thank you :)
i check my critique and i decide to made new render so check later for the update :)
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chellethecat Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2009
The lighting on this is stunning, and the shadows look great. This is really a great scene. The only thing I could possibly suggest would be maybe the slight spot coming in from outside; maybe would look better a little higher up? Just a thought though. :)
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3DEricDesign Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
thx for the feedback if i made new render i change the light position for sure :)
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anthony-art Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
very cool render art work :jedi:
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3DEricDesign Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
thx anthony :)
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Ean-Sze Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
beautiful work !!
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3DEricDesign Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
thank you so much :)
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Ean-Sze Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
welcome
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brendamn Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2009
wow this looks amazing! such a awesome place, love the lights along the roof, nice touch!
the only thing i found 'off' is that big glow of white by the door, i know there would be lots of lighting there, but its just too over powering, just a thought.
everything else looks stunning though! well done :)
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3DEricDesign Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
thx for your comment and feedback :)
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Black-Raven546 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Beautiful!! only thing "wrong" is that cabinet under the swan i don't know why but something about it seems "off" but beautiful work!
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3DEricDesign Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
thx dude for your feedback and critique :)
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Black-Raven546 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
always welcome
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3DEricDesign Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
thx :)
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